18 years old girl who is constantly being pulled back and forth between reality and fantasy.
Oh, and my works are always open to critiques and comments, I need someone to point me the way
A Fateful MatchKing Richard, having his name announced to the crowd, made his way to the front. He loaded his bow and held his aim. Just as he pressed the release, his bow quivered and his arrow flew out of the target. A hush spread through the audience and Elle turned to her sister just as she turned her way. Their eyes locked. Elle's lips hardly moved as she mouthed the words to Carrie but Carrie hardly need to see. She pushed herself up from the stand and ran towards the steps, pulling the hem of her dress up to her calves.A Fateful Match by Elovinia
Elle’s words resounded in her ear. “Help father!”
She ran as fast as she her legs would carry. She pleaded and begged for her father to wait for her. She pushed away her worst fear for her father; she could not even bear to think of it. As she ran down the steps, she saw her father staggering towards the royal tent. She squeezed every bit of energy she has reserved inside her into her legs, pushing the earth hard beneath her feet.
“Let there be time, let
Scarecrow, The PuppetScarecrow appeared in his magician’s costume in the middle of the dark void. The big white mask covering his whole head earned him the name of Scarecrow. He sharply threw out right arm from underneath his cape and drove his fist to the ground, kneeling before his revered master.Scarecrow, The Puppet by Elovinia
“Your excellency,” he said.
There was a puff of smoke and as it began to clear, a voice called out.
“You said before that you have found the princess,” growled the monstrous mask. The red heart-shaped apparition expanded and shrunk in a rhythm like a beating heart. “Why have you not brought her back?”
“I—I apologise,” Scarecrow replied with a slight stutter. The appearance of his master always made him tremble with fear, especially when she is fueled by anger. “However, your Excellency, you know that the princess is guarded by the Doll Knights.”
“You’re saying they’re interfering with you?” the mask asked in disbelie